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esecaily if the work is one of mine... I need attention too.
P.S. Thanks for putting up with my rammbleing.
Long name wont fit arrgGenius and the Dead Laboratory AssistantLong name wont fit arrg
-Genius?
-Genius killed the cat. {She states, a flurry of anger growing in her voice} ~The curious genius and me the unsuspecting cat.
~A sexy cat, young, taking on the world with a flick of her hips.
-Death is cold, death is slow.... No... not slow? Death stops time. {She ponders distantly}
~The real world shrank away from me.
~I am shunned by logic and reason, like a kid with cooties. (though this is not a playground) ~All around me float visions of his shinny rubber gloves (they cover his whole arm)
~and his long white coat (so
Planet Nine Part 8Once in town they rented a hotel, just to get out of the mobile fortress for a few days, and to let it air out a bit. As a first act of freedom from cell blocks and mobile fortresses Petitia took a bath. The shower in the mobile fortress was only a shower and she loved bathes. While Petitia was enjoying the simple pleasures in life Jarico went out to find adventure, but mostly solace, in her usual hiding place, a bustling market. Roegar sat and stared at the wall... he had a few things to think over. Markets in underground cities were always fun, in them you could loose your way, almost get mugged, find cheep bars, start a bar fight, end up iPlanet Nine Part 8
Planet Nine Part 7By the time Petitia and Jarico came out of the bathroom Roegar had made himself sick with cookies, he was laying on the bottom bunk and his belly was very distended. Jarico sat down in a chair and grabbed a handful of cookie. Petitia sat next to Roegar, who groaned when her weight moved the bed. She too began to eat cookies. By the end of the night they were all very sick and there were only three cookies left. The mind set was that there were only thirty cookies left so what was the point in not eating them all. It's a shame to have gone so far and stopped at three left, but they may have exploded if they had eaten any more. We all know thePlanet Nine Part 7
Words, Tears, and HeartsWords are dust Mirth and Soot clog my mouth My throat is dry Caked with all I choose not to sayWords, Tears, and Hearts
Tears are joy Their glistening bodies contain worlds within my eye But eyes are dry I cannot afford the luxury to weep
Hearts are lava Moving, changing, burning But magma forever solid in one unchanging form A dear in the headlights A cow in the field Oblivious to the coming slaughter
Red sky in the morning, sailor take warning
| I am me I am alone I dance, I sing, I play I frolic, I jump, I feel and at the end of every day I am alone again, with nothing but my pain, so real |
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Lol I'm very glad you enjoyed my response. I'm a little nuts myself. It's very rare to find hard core writers on here, not many people come here to look at literature. I added you to my watch list, I am very excited to read all of your works. Words paint some pretty good images, it's just they're time consuming, that's why many people don't take the time to read, they're LAZY. I'm like that too, but you've earned some of my time by giving me a creative comment. Small things like that really do pay off in the end, lol.
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Being nuts is good, it makes us better then the average person, because we are less afraid of new things and we are more interesting.
I an amazed yet again, I can't believe you want to read all my stuff, not even my friends do that. I am at a loss for words... I think I love you
I am also a fault of being one of those many lazy people who doesn't read much. That is a bit hypocritical of me, but I do try.
I am glad to have given you a creative comment, I wish that sort of thing would happen more often, why must it always be "Thanks for the fav" I hate that... and so does my brother.
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Lol. If someone favs me I don't always give them a big pretty comment, but I look at their gallery at the very least. What I hate is the people who look at one picture in your gallery, fav it, and NEVER look at the rest of the gallery. I don't care if people fav, comment or watch, but they can at least look at everything.
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